Age : 29 Location : College. Image Software : MS Paint XP Registration date : 2007-07-03
Subject: Help with music.... Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:32 am
im finally writing a song, but i need help with finishing
(Verse one) its time for me to pack my bags, and leave this dreaded town you said you loved me, but your never around
(chorus) ill love you forever, my promise is true i'd stay with you now, but i know you wont love me too im leaving today, but i wanted to say, i love you
can you guys help finish it
Konpakku, The Dark Hero
Age : 30 Location : USA Image Software : MSPaint, and Paint.net for transparency Registration date : 2007-09-13
Subject: Re: Help with music.... Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:41 am
It doesn't have enough rhyming.
Anth Retired Greatness
Age : 32 Location : England Registration date : 2006-11-20
Subject: Re: Help with music.... Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:31 am
Not really the help you were looking for but advice all the same
Subject: Help with music.... 
Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:32 am
