E.T.F(update: SuperBoy)

Nice design RAW! I'm diggin' the suit.

Heres RAW's First Villain
This is just his street cloths

Name: Krauser

Alias: ???

Powers: Super Strength, Super Speed, and is able to shot energy beams out of his right hand.

Bio: Krauser was born with a mysterious rare skin disease that makes him pale and his skin starts to fall off leaving muscle. As a child everyone made fun of him which gave him a very high temper. At the age of 10 he was banned for 7 diffrent schools. Now that he is older the doctors found out what was wrong with him but he needs a very large amount of money to get the surgery to fix the falling off skin. His plan was to steal money from every bank in the city it would of worked if RAW had not interfered.

Great hero and villian Raw.

The hero reminds me of a power ranger.

Well thanks guys
Heres a version of RAW after his first fight with Krauser

and an update on Krausers bio

Great Krauser bio and beat up Raw.

realy great hero but hope the costum will change ...its looks great for microing...but be true its not that special....so hope this is just the first costum ....and he improves it from time to time...and als nice work on krauser...but try to make the parts where the skin is gone look a little bit "verzerrt" cause ..i dont know but i think it should look so...^^

What is wrong with his Costum?

its look just to normal...^^ sry but it is a really good made pullallover latex costum(thats what it looks like for me)it dont make a big hero out of him..its not that much different....i dont want to be rude..its really good(like i said) but within the time i hope it will get more individuality

Your not being rude I like the honesty.
Well I have started a new one last night but do you have anty suggestions

you said he has no "real" power its "just" the suit..so the suit most be Supermegaultra that all this ower fits in this secondskin-dress...do you have icq/msn then we can talk their

Well I said that first but in the bio it says he has super strenght and super agility..all the suit has is like nets to catch enemeys and rock boots to fly and no the only message thing I have is Myspace IM.

I made you a Present.

thats awsome I love how real the face looks! thank you very much! I love it
Soon I will be posting a new version of RAW with sum of the parts from Devons gift, mostly the human face and the mask with sum small changes.

Heres an updated on RAW's Costum...Tell me which one you think is better plz

................NEW...............................OLD............

The new costume. I like the head you used.

But really, the suit looks better.

Thanks Devon I really like the head you made for me 2.

Heres my new avatar..RAW beat up in new costum with a night raining background

This is my frist try on doing a background plz tell me what you think

not bad actually
want me to make a cool one for you?

the new one...it not looks this all in one cause of the black parts... the sign is defintly better...The mask looks more helmet like cause of the round form so its not a second head...okay the face is devons part..but this also looks better except the eyes had to have more of the shadow to look lmore like the original thing...THe boots are perfect...this is what i mean ti improve him and he will No he looks much better nearlyy perfect

Ya Shadow that would be great..and Burning for the face I did change sum things I had to put my smurk and I changed sum of the face hair to look a lil more like the original.

I like the new costume.

Alright RAW if you want a cool one, can I please have the micro you used in your avatar maybe? If not it's ok but yknow, accruacy is good

yeah i see it isnt devons face all over..so sry its just look great and had made tso much evolution in so short time

Here you go Shadow..I will be making a story soon of why he looks so beat up